Sunday, January 4, 2009

# As I Cross The City Limits... Comments

Rating: 2.8

As i cross the city limits
it takes a while
before thoughts recede
from my cluttered mind
...
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Mamta Agarwal
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Sandra Fowler 11 January 2009

The country has a timeless charm which you have captured and kept in the landscapes of your mind. Thank you for sharing your poetic vision with your readers. It is 20/20, Mamta. Lovely... Warmest regards, Sandra

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 January 2009

3 rd stanza, something like that I wrote in my LIVING IDOL. Since I lived (still living) most of life in villages, I am very much acquainted with these beautiful scenes. But, unfortunately, villages, nowadays are spoiled by politics; too many group fightings, enemity etc. losing their original enchantment. But I wonder, in one trip, at 80kmph you saw so much and depicted so beautifully without missing a single beautiful aspect of a village. Your observation power is really extraordinary Madam.

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Kesav Easwaran 09 January 2009

a well enjoyed 'honey bought' countryside journey...the verbal images you draw here are nice to visualise, Mamta...good piece...10

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Raj Nandy 05 January 2009

I love crossing the city limits to view the country side, leaving behind our urban problems for a while! I enjoyed this poem! -Raj Nandy

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 January 2009

Time never seems to touch the countryside, or so it seems Mamta, the closer you get to citys the faster time seems to pass... Enjoy the views Mamta 10

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