Sunday, September 16, 2018

As I Close My Eyes Comments

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As I close my eyes to sleep
In deep worry I live a life in the day
Day in, day out I make a pledge that will stay
Stay till I meet my creator
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Obiaeli Ifediirichukwu Victor
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Chinedu Dike 12 December 2019

A fine and lofty verse beautifully brought forth with spiritual insight. A lovely devotional piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 September 2018

In deep worry! ! Thanks for sharing.

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benjamin chiu uy 22 September 2018

in your poems are the beauty of abeautiful soul such tender words, great poem +++++

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Enendu Mmesoma 20 September 2018

This is great and thoughtful 👎

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Ifediirichukwu Victor 20 September 2018

Thanks baby... God bless you

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Enendu Mmesoma 20 September 2018

This is great and thoughtful 👎

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Kostas Lagos 17 September 2018

A tender and warm poem.It's really beautiful.

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Ifediirichukwu Victor 18 September 2018

Thanks a bunch dear. May the Lord bless you. Amen

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Muzahidul Reza 17 September 2018

A meditative way you have made in this poem, prayers and thoughts have awaken you, ...... excellent poem thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 September 2018

Victor, such an uplifting poem.........................

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Obiaeli Ifediirichukwu Victor

Obiaeli Ifediirichukwu Victor

Umuchu in Auguata L.G.A of Anambra state
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