Wednesday, April 9, 2008

As I Breathe The Sweet Air Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I breathe the sweet air all around me,
And I gaze at the beautiful sky,
Far over the valleys and mountains,
An eagle is soaring so high.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Duncan Wyllie 15 April 2008

Like a tale from old, this has such a sence of elegance and quality about it, , but then! So does so much of what you write, , in fact, , all that I have read by you so far! ! Thankyou for sharing your amazing talents with us your readers Love duncan X

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George Sicillia 15 April 2008

As I read your songs of beauty And I breathe the sweet air all around me I could see the dancing angels On a choir to God Almighty Hi Andrew.. keep up the good work!

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C.R. Clark 13 April 2008

I do love poems about nature and this one is excellent, excellent, excellent. You paint such a beautiful picture, Andrew. Thanks....10... Richard

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Abha Sharma 11 April 2008

a beautiful nature poem attaching humble sentiments...and spreading a serene aura around...

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Thad Wilk 09 April 2008

With your poetry you have painted another perfect picture of nature in its glory! *10*! ! Thanks for sharing Andrew! ! ! Best regards , Friend Thad

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Ernestine Northover 09 April 2008

Your writes hold wonderful pictures painted so beautifully with your words. I so enjoy reading them, I do so love poems that make sense, tell some lovely stories and have delicious contents. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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The cadence of your work, is smooth, and lyrically enhanced...well positioned imagery, along with the fluxing structure, makes for an enjoyable read....Solid Work, once again, Andrew. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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