Sunday, November 8, 2015

As I Awake This Morning Comments

Rating: 4.0

As I awake I look for you but dont see you,
I look out the window and see that the skies are no longer blue..

Oh how I miss you, your smile the very thing that could light up a dark room, now the doom has my very heart consumed, as if my heart was dragged under a broom...
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kevin woods
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Shakil Ahmed 08 November 2015

beautiful poem, you have expressed your feelings very clearly and beautifully, i enjoyed reading the poem

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 November 2015

An excellent nightmare, perhaps revisited. Enjoyed the write. Thanks for sharing.6 points.

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