Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, April 3, 2014

As His Demise Comments

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Person can not dig his own grave
He will never crave for his downfall
Only mad man can go with such adventure
As he is unaware of misadventure
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

look into my eyes Barf Smelagud22 minutes ago your demise will be a surprise Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

I like it Max French17 minutes ago I was a little lost. I think I understand what you're trying to say, but your use of language is unique and leads to very dark imagery. I like most of it. You might have done this on purpose, but you could use a little proofreading on this poem. Other than some small errors, that might have been intentional, I can safely say that you have a unique voice Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

not sure Eric McMillian22 minutes ago didn't make sense

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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