Monday, January 19, 2009

As He Slept Comments

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He slept as she,
on tippytoes,
came in,
she smiled
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Emancipation Planz 28 June 2009

Hxx! ... I was 'surprised' to come across this '2nd time around'... and guess what, infinitely as enjoyable as first time around... aroha, DDDxx

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Fay Slimm 20 January 2009

Drawing us all into your world of love and happy future, we wish you all you wish yourself dear friend...... a well composed narrative from a composed mind........ fondly from Fay.......xx

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LOL! Well have to agree with Savannah... Good personiFACE(s) ... as usual.. you direct the reader to much and many details... aroha Dxx

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Savannah Nicole 19 January 2009

good personifacation! =)

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