Thursday, May 9, 2013

As He Dreamed Of Slamming The Door Comments

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As he dreamed of slamming the door
and walking away on a path
where oxygen abounds
and no word astounds
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Altair Laahad
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Poetheart Morgan 11 May 2013

So you are a heart of secrets! ! ! ! At the end stay or go, nothing is so important but what remain on your secret heart OH! that is your true and guide! ! ! Beautiful, enchanting and dangerous Heart. Peace in your soul Great Poel

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Poetheart Morgan 09 May 2013

What heart full of secrets and hopes! ! First you want to go, after, can not and finally the Poet is full of new hopes. How many secrets can endure your heart?

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Guess Who 09 May 2013

I really like your description and phrases....... good poem good write..... keep the good work up GuessWho

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