Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, November 5, 2013

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Enjoy childhood
Play in neighborhood
Make friends
And nicely end too
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Marvin Brato 06 November 2013

Great write, all positive options to do in life are mentioned....these are the ways we can live a contented life! Thank you!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Dharmendra Arya likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 10 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

beautiful Kathleen Jinks59 minutes ago I love this Comment +1 Great topic

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Debra Lalli57 minutes ago I love your fourth stanza

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

i like Marcos Estrada59 minutes ago =) Comment +1 Way short, way limited.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Ben Taylor58 minutes ago Nice work, elaborate on the poem and fill it with a little more thought and content! Otherwise, nice effort!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Weeping willow Nicely expressed are your words; ]

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Enjoy childhood Play in neighborhood

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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