Monday, November 4, 2013
As Foe Comments
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“Life” to me as it seemed
Was dark and deemed
It needed more and more
Time with thrust to explore
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Ashutosh Pandey
04 November 2013
The meaning behind the poem is good, however the syllable count is a bit of a throw off!
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7/27/2025 2:24:16 PM # 1.0.0
great Juma Rashid41 minutes ago I like the line Sea must be looked to you as foe But that shall not deter you to go Comment +1 Good