Thursday, October 9, 2008

As Fall Breaks Through Comments

Rating: 5.0

As fall breaks loose
My senses do too
Touch of the leaves
The crinkle beneath my feet
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Elizabeth Tews
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Linda Ori 15 October 2008

Lovely imagery in this wonderfully creative piece. My favorite season of the year, and you certainly brought it to life here. Lovely! Linda :)

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Constantinos Grigoriadis 11 October 2008

A nice image of the natur. Nicely done! I wish always the best in poetry. Regards Constantinos

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Marilyn Lott 09 October 2008

Delightful poem, Elizabeth. I too love the sights, smells and feel of fall! Your poem awakes all the senses of this wonderful season. Good job - a '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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