Sunday, July 20, 2014

As Dawn Breaks Comments

Rating: 4.8

I remember it had been a warm day,
With a vast, crowd of clouds,
Spanning overhead with streaks of red.
I had dicovered here a sense of feeling proud.
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Hazel Durham
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2015

Remembering the warm day with dazzling light of realization is definitely fantastic with this imagery drawn here. Making presence with praying will is nice with sharing.10

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Akhtar Jawad 03 January 2015

Praying they will have stable minds And won't make my mistakes. As the whispering breeze calls out my name, Over the Curragh plains as dawn breaks. A beautiful description.

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Mary Forrester 01 January 2015

Such a beautiful poem Hazel. . Dazzling from my weary soul, A nugget of gold to be wrapped, Never to be carelessly sold, Just an inner light to unfold. Your such a talented lady.

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Heather Wilkins 03 December 2014

as the whispering wind callas out my name nice write Hazel

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Amitava Sur 30 July 2014

Enjoyed the poem with the lovely detailing during the trip to Curragh plain. Thans for sharing such a lovely write.

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Lyn Paul 28 July 2014

A captivating write Hazel, as always. Thank you

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Valerie Dohren 23 July 2014

A.wistful poem of times long past. Lovely Hazel, so many inspired lines.

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Bursting with a beauty that is bucolic!

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Valsa George 20 July 2014

With you, my mind also has flown into the vast open emerald stretches of Currah plains.... Here we can forget our inner races, lower our heavy baggage and gallop on thorough bred horses.... race through joy's bumpless highways! Altogether a refreshing feel your poem imparts! Beautiful! ! Top marks!

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Mark Dillon 20 July 2014

A sense of freedom yet belonging, great thought in this.

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Mark Dillon 20 July 2014

Nice work Hazel, The Curragh means so much to the people who worked and lived there, and there's a great sense of freedom and yet belonging, and your poem delivers that.

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