As Darkness Consumes You Comments

beautiful piece and powerful All I see is eternal night This is a curse that you can never fight You can't go back Your light is gone forever

Life can really tarnish a person's self-perception and world view..it is so difficult to remain pure in heart and spirit..very profound and insightful poem that is nicely written..congratulations on being Member of The Day..a ten..

How depressing and wonderfully horrific. Good name that will draw the readers in. I wish it described more of what happenned to you after the darkness consumed you. Like the idea that the author enjoys the process of the consuming darkness. We must see to understand darkness. Understanding the darkness will allow us to choose if we want it...because if you want light, you have the power to choose light. Thought inspiring idea but the poem needs a bit of works.

Darkness can consume us at any age. It is sad when it affects youth. This is the age to learn to fight darkness and not to loose hope. Learn to fight and you will not be consumed by it even when you age.

Precocious and engaging at first but it soon sounds like something a young person would write with no experience in growing old but trying so hard to imagine being old & miserable...

Like this too, think though (my POV) that needs more details to make it more poignant and transport more emotions.

Hello Kevin again super poem of day which I read over a year ago. Well done and hope all is well

I hope some where in your eternal night you will see a beautiful star directing you to life. Do hang on for your powerful words will heal so many

The mysticism is worth an applaud

Sad lines. Hope that you will distinguish soon that the Light is still there. Look closer and you will see it in the innocent laughter of the children, in the morning dew resting peacefully on the rose petals... Light never fails to disappoint, never goes away. Light is life! ! Think positive my fellow poet! Regards, ~Besa

Awesome Lines! ! ! i'm speechless

Pure sense. Am innocently born but the world deceived me, trying to repent all day.

Lovely and powerful write.

Lovely and powerful write.

I'm speechless, amazing write, and its so easy to relate to.10/10. A new favorite ;)

Those who walked in darkness have seen the brightest light if they wanted to see it. Anyway, you have shaped your poem very originally and only 10 for your work :) Best wishes. A.

wow the bottom two lines kind of scared me lol

there is a god to forgive you! you just haven't found him yet! !

there is a god to forgive you! you just haven't found him yet! !

Thats so true! i would know