As Clouds Now Weep Comments

Hi

Can someone give me the summary

Aww thats sad my sister realize that and shes answering a sa and thats just really really sad and i like your sad bio that you made: D

Your beautiful refrain carries the elegiac mood of this poem. Even the clouds weep for the plight of this unfortunate human being.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

This one is easy on the ear, Andrew, replete with melancholy chorus - wonderful lyrics for a song, methinks. And the subject of the poem is tragic, too and shows how depression can so easily become a self-fulfilling prophesy and a barrier to human interaction. Again, there is a Dickensian feel to this beautifully crafted poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

An amazing piece Andrew...you bring out the sense of loss with so much feeling - your reader experience the pathos...10/10 Regards Sandra

The act of missing the adored one is nicely elaborated in this poem The state of mind that overwhelms you when love is lost though but not forgotten has been interplayed very creatively with the imagery of clouds. For a person who personifies true love, the Nature always remain intact and never let him down even after all that loneliness that prevails. The melancholy is beautified nicely in the essence of the poem........10/10

Hi Andrew! ! A masterfully written poem, poignant & captivating start to finish! ! Your penning, is golden! My best regards, *10*! ! Friend Thad

What beautiful grief you offered, Andrew, this is a line that gives to nobleness to a verse...10... / Thank you./ Best wishes, Tsira

You are the master of pathos Andrew an impecable write. Regards Ann