As Cloud Now Lies Upon The Hills Comments

I absolutly Love the title to this poem, it is so tranquil and yet so soft... Your imagery is absoluty lovely in this Andrew, as always, a boring 10! ! You are my favoirte poet on here, do you know that? ? Bonnie

Excellent poem using excellent imagery.10 for it.

High imagery...excellent similies..enjoyable piece.10

A dreamy beautiful write Andrew. Although not rhyming, it seems to rhyme somehow. It is somewhat musical in its arrangement and a great read, very well produced indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Let there always be sunshine through the rains in life, Another skillfull poem by you Andrew WELL DONE Love duncan X

Greenish thoughts peak high, in mind- sky in the poem- gets gradually cloaked in grey...light- the happy feelings- recedes, fading...to where? And the mind unhappily wet- rain drizzles- knowing of a trip led by a gripping ghostly hand cold to an unknown land through hide out ways...awesome poem, Andrew...nature apparently prominent though, the poem is more philosophic and insightful...the style traditional and pure...10+

Beautiful poem Andrew. The anguish that lies within your images of nature takes the reader beyond mere pastoral beauty. Stunning, heartfelt writing. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

An awesome poem Andrew! Brilliantly penned, start to finish! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad