Friday, August 31, 2007

As Circles Take Flight, Ships Will Return Comments

Rating: 3.5

There are many things in my own life, That I don’t understand - things like,
How chance comes, and how chance goes, and how it all slips through our hands.
So I take a look around me, I see people shaking hands;
I see people breaking promises and I see people making plans.
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Mark Andrew Hogg
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 16 October 2009

great poem.......................

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Not a member No 4 02 September 2007

The questioning character of this helps to generate interest in the reader. The choice of language is good throughout, and your thoughts as expressed have depth and maturity. A very fine piece of work. jim

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x... x... 31 August 2007

Perhaps out of all our shattered dreams we can still salvage some 'good memories.' Then your Circle here can continue and injustice be no more. Nice write in here, excellent content.~~~mm. :) ~~~~~

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Mark Andrew Hogg

Mark Andrew Hogg

Dumfries/Ayr/Stirling, Scotland
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