There are many things in my own life, That I don’t understand - things like,
How chance comes, and how chance goes, and how it all slips through our hands.
So I take a look around me, I see people shaking hands;
I see people breaking promises and I see people making plans.
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The questioning character of this helps to generate interest in the reader. The choice of language is good throughout, and your thoughts as expressed have depth and maturity. A very fine piece of work. jim
Perhaps out of all our shattered dreams we can still salvage some 'good memories.' Then your Circle here can continue and injustice be no more. Nice write in here, excellent content.~~~mm. :) ~~~~~
great poem.......................