Saturday, February 6, 2010

As Children Comments

Rating: 4.5

as children
we played
spontaneously
together;
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john o'connell
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Martine Kolber 12 March 2010

Wonderful! I wish we'd all the see the world more often like children, it would make the world such a better place! Love, Martine

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Fleance Candide 21 February 2010

simplicity conveys innocence so well. nice structure.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 16 February 2010

well narrate in a way.... nice poem

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