Friday, June 20, 2008

As Beautiful As That Night Comments

Rating: 2.1

That night, a night of admirable callings
With larches of leaves living the trees
To join the cloud, this adores that pleasantry breeze.
The sky was blue
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Godspower Oshodin
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Ebi Robert 02 January 2012

Being romantic makes me glad. Keep it up.......... You will find more of that in me.

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Obinna Eruchie 19 June 2009

a lovely deep thought, well done.

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Karen Kelley 16 September 2008

Deep thoughs..but rather difficult to follow your intent.

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Anjali Sinha 08 September 2008

wow! ! ! ! flowing like a waterfall in spring soothing write +++10 regards anjali

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Melissa Coventry 24 July 2008

Bravo! A piece of well flowing poetry that is like silk to skin as sound to ears, does your poet within come to you with ease! Greatly enjoyed and well written, Mel xxx

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Julie Neises 29 June 2008

A beautiful poem! Very well penned.

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Godspower Oshodin

Lagos Nigeria
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