Tuesday, September 23, 2008

As Beautiful As Me (Part 3) Comments

Rating: 2.7

You say you find me in the gathering stars,
Evanescent beauty, iam no shooting star
But I am as beautiful as the midnight sun.
You say you find me in the roses.
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Reshma Ramesh
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Jude Pereira 03 September 2009

A pitch... Swing... Home run... Double belter... Ultimate... Loved all the three parts... infinity into three... Infinity... you rock...

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Barry A. Lanier 17 March 2009

ah poetess a beauty without modesty and a wisdom beyond years.....

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Allan Macli Borges 06 October 2008

it's really lovely your trilogy of beauty showing it just as the beauty use to be: captivanting and dangerous. my 10 for you.

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Reshma Ramesh 23 September 2008

standing ovation..........well done Sadiq......iam honored..thankyou verymuch..what can i say.......: -))

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Carl Harris 23 September 2008

This third part of your great poem was equally as interesting and charming as the first two parts, Reshma, and I liked your repetition of that great ending line from your first poem in these latter two parts as well. Your use of the phrase neotic venus late in this poem has me wondering if you meant neoteric (a modern writer/thinker) or neurotic (a medical term for being nervous) ? Overall, however, your poetic talent shines in all three of these wonderful poems. Carl.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 September 2008

wow! ! mind-blowing! the last verse touches the truth! every beauty is its own kind. no comparison! ............10+

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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