You say you find me in the gathering stars,
Evanescent beauty, iam no shooting star
But I am as beautiful as the midnight sun.
You say you find me in the roses.
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ah poetess a beauty without modesty and a wisdom beyond years.....
it's really lovely your trilogy of beauty showing it just as the beauty use to be: captivanting and dangerous. my 10 for you.
standing ovation..........well done Sadiq......iam honored..thankyou verymuch..what can i say.......: -))
This third part of your great poem was equally as interesting and charming as the first two parts, Reshma, and I liked your repetition of that great ending line from your first poem in these latter two parts as well. Your use of the phrase neotic venus late in this poem has me wondering if you meant neoteric (a modern writer/thinker) or neurotic (a medical term for being nervous) ? Overall, however, your poetic talent shines in all three of these wonderful poems. Carl.
wow! ! mind-blowing! the last verse touches the truth! every beauty is its own kind. no comparison! ............10+
A pitch... Swing... Home run... Double belter... Ultimate... Loved all the three parts... infinity into three... Infinity... you rock...