Friday, September 19, 2008

As Beautiful As Me Part 2 Comments

Rating: 2.8

It aint my fault you call me The temptress
They say 'beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder'
Thoughts of love why do you smolder?
It aint my fault you walked this way
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Reshma Ramesh
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Jude Pereira 03 September 2009

A belter of the prequel... Nice...

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Randy Hogan 11 November 2008

Such a beautiful poem the rhythm the rhyme my god why do i feel hunger! Hey does any body have some cookies! very beautiful poem hey we need to change your name to AWESOME a10 princess

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 October 2008

Amazing poem, lovely- 'I am rare to find, a limited edition I am only one of a kind, only as beautiful as me'

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 01 October 2008

An enchanting poem by a gifted poet my 10

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Stephanie Fiddy 26 September 2008

beautiful poem! truely a beautiful write :)

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Carl Harris 23 September 2008

This delightful second part of your fascinating poem was as charming as the first one, Reshma. Again, you excell in vivid imagery and use quite effective and descriptive word selection. You have a considerable talent for poetic expression. Carl.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2008

beautiful poem, Reshma... Sadiq's poem i have read... to come out with a sequel of your own on the inspiration of reading a good poem is noble on your part and that speaks well of the poetic mind you own...10

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Sadiqullah Khan 23 September 2008

i find you in the gatherings of the star in the blistered wounds of my heart transient are thou in thy passing like rose petal thou shall wither when the dry wind of the autumn touches thou on the edges age is thy enemy thy abode is ultimatluy my heart in deep recesses of the depths of my memory thou make a tomb like the Taj thou art the idea that has made me the wonderer in the desert of love as thou never existed what thou pretendeth to be

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Caterpillar MC 22 September 2008

Its really hard to appear proud without being arogant...and u have achived that in such a beautiful way....Way to Go Reshma...! ! !

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Barbara Terry 19 September 2008

This is just as wonderful as the first part. You tell it like it is to the love of your life, and the images are so well painted, they should be hung in Louvre. You go girl, and don't take any sass from the love of your life that is mired in your beauty. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, Barbara

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Anand Dixit 19 September 2008

Another excellent write

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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