As Autumn Ends Comments

': Suddenly, angry winds begin to blow Her rage striking out like lightening through the haze' Is 'angry winds' the subject of the second phrase? You express your disdain for winter pretty well but the rhythm of the poem is rather convoluted. Study meter especially with English grammar and poetic structure. Read classic poems along with modern ones.

Coldness and melancholy is manevolently eddies in this poem.Good sensations.

beautiful, but a bit unnatural

AH! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! GORGEOUSNESS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Amazing composition with wonderful metaphor. Added my 10 to it with pleasure.