Sunday, February 10, 2008

As All Hope Dies Comments

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As all hope dies, I look deep into your eyes
I try to seek out the pain....
I try to uncover these tears you hide...
But you have yet to find promise
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X X 09 April 2008

this poem may have been half decent if you had actually thought about the words you were using instead of just comming up with the first word that rhymes. poor show

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John Tiong Chunghoo 30 March 2008

hope is to be sought hope is there when one needs it through prayers....dripping heart

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foxy babii 11 February 2008

i will hold on to all i hav tho all i hav is u its beautiful words are still not enough to say how much i love it

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