As A Ghost Comments

A poem of high drama and tragedy. Your last lines are very poignant and bittersweet.10/10. Kind wishes, Sandra

separation from our loveones can be devastating to children-and adults as well.But even when a divorce takes place between two people, if there is love, their spirit is forever present.Thanks for inviting me to read-one of my children is having a personal experience with divorce..I feel that the ghost/spirit of my husband is an ever present in the home. a 10+++

life tastes sweeter as and when we give more than we take more...leading to a sweeter death? Perhaps...a real life situation presented well in a sentimental wrapper...good...10

Here also his mother comes to his rescue. Mother is mother who is second to none.

sam! unless i am seeing something different from the other readers? what i see is the taking of ones own life, rather than lose the ones he loves through divorce. anyways! a ten for my interpretation of it.

A heart- withering poem of the effects of divorces. Thanks for sharing it with me. a10

I hate it when the children suffer of (sins) the fathers.

The heart is not a logical organ. Top marks for your narration.

A very sad, but well written poem about a subject most don't care to discuss. A good write Samayan, I enjoyed it. Your friend Lynn

The divorced slid and fell the bottle he emptied out was not just alcohol as his eyes closed his mom came to his mind when he lost at school and cried she told there is a life ahead she stood there for him i liked the way you have put it, sam.

so sad but you have written it so well 10

A very tragic piece Samanyan....well written as it definitely makes an impact on the reader...

No decree can stop the spirit from loving! Love spirit is high power no power can stop it! Nice one!