Monday, January 11, 2016

As A Firefighter Is My Mother Comments

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As a firefighter is my mother,
She might climb my ladder,
To fight my fire by water.
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Abderrahmane Dakir
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Roseann Shawiak 19 January 2016

Very descriptive expression of your mother, the shining light of your life like a fire of love burning within you. What a wonderful woman she must be for you, her son to write such a beautiful tribute to her! Having two sons, talking with them every day, asking them if they're alright and telling them to be careful, I can identify with the love your mother has for you. Awesome poem! Thank you for sharing your mother's love with us. RoseAnn

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Abderrahmane Dakir 20 January 2016

Thank you for this awesome comment. After God's love there is mother's love that give us the warmth in this life.

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Melvina Germain 18 January 2016

I feel the love pouring through every line, it's so easy to tell that your Mom is your shining light. Abderrahmane you have certainly left a heartprint here and I love that. Thank you so much for sharing this delightful tribute to your Mom.....

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Abderrahmane Dakir 18 January 2016

Thank you Melivina for your awesome comment.

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Melvina Germain 18 January 2016

I see the love pouring through the lines in this beautiful poem, I can tell your mother shines withinn your heart and soul. What a delight she must feel having you for a son. Awesome tribute to your Mom

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Abderrahmane Dakir 11 January 2016

Thank you for reading si Driss. I cried by writing this poem because It's rarely to receive a call for one that tell you are you ok. Thanks for your awesome comment.

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