As A Bright Light Comes Near Comments

Luke I have just read your new poem and I think it is amazing even better than the others.Hope I DO this correctly it seems you never got my last message. Machstick grandad is out with Benjy but Iknow he will be really impressed when he reads this new one keep writing love nan

Hi Luke. This poem is really good, especially for someone as young as you. It is really good to see and read a young poet such as yourself, and i think you will eventually turn into a famous poet. I love the Boooooooooooooooommmmmm! ! ! ! ! bit, its really clever and expressess the sound really well. Well done Luke Owen