Saturday, September 12, 2020

Artlessness Comments

Rating: 4.7

And it was one of the silliest stories ever told
From beginning to end, it made no sense
It could be that trouble is already a-brewing
With or without pride and fortune
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Hannatu Pqrs
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Khairul Ahsan 28 September 2020

Loved your short biography.

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

ha ha! I'm glad that you liked it.

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Khairul Ahsan 28 September 2020

'Artlessness truly is the most difficult art' - this art can be seen everywhere now!

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

Indeed so! Effortlessly too these days! Thank you for commenting.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 September 2020

Artlessness a great art where are hidden all scholastic secret, unspoken genius of an artist which are exposed as multi-literal aspects sometimes I feel scholastic or artistic genius is a madness of thoughts; it's impossible to understand for average or unwise/unskilled brain

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you found the poem meaningful in some way.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 September 2020

Artlessness truly is the most difficult art The story does make sense after all! ......great and wisely said that - " Artlessness truly is the most difficult art" yeah right I think so; Artlessness is truly difficult art where are hidden many grandeur art of genius unspoken silent secret arts and all are exposed entirely together but unskilled person won't understand it; wisely penned the poem on Artlessness; congrats for being selected this as POD....5******

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

Thanks so much for the comment. I'm glad you found some meaning out of it.

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Lyn Paul 28 September 2020

A refreshing and interesting " Poem of the Day" " Misery is now a thing of the past" Thank You Hannatu, Best wishes.

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

Thank you so much for caring enough to leave a note!

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 September 2020

Stories! ! ! ! For the love of art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked it.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 28 September 2020

Great poem. But the message i get is dangerously flawed. If we dont worry about spilt milk then milk will be spilled again. Thats why proper history must be kept so that atrocities will not be repested. Songs and poems of things that happened before like slavery genocide and biological agent injected based on race are recorded so that such activity is brought to the public. Poem is good messaage wrong. But thats my DM opinion

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

Interesting perspective of my poem you have there. To be fair, there are as many meanings to a poem as its readers. That said, I'd rather not spoil the message for my readers. I'm only glad that it made any impression at all. Thank you for your comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 September 2020

A well penned poem of the day. Truly magnificent. Congrats on your featured piece.....5 stars*****

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

Thank you so much for caring enough to respond.

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