Saturday, May 3, 2008

Artistic Aspirations Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'd like to paint please show me how,
The pull is strong within me now,
Create in colours, let them flow,
Express emotions, let them go.
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Edith Oram
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Kesav Easwaran 11 August 2008

The last stanza has a beauty of its own...well...Edith, this one is a master frame...the line, 'Now, where's the light? . commands the entire poem to march towards bright colours...poem ten grade

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 August 2008

Yes! Masterpiece complete! A masterpiece of words and expressions. kudos sathya narayana

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R H 03 May 2008

An expressive wordpainting Edith - emotions coloured and visuals eloquently expressed. Lovely.. j x

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Anita Atina 03 May 2008

What a lovely painting Edith!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 03 May 2008

Vivid imagery sathya narayana

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Edith Oram

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