I'd like to paint please show me how,
The pull is strong within me now,
Create in colours, let them flow,
Express emotions, let them go.
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Yes! Masterpiece complete! A masterpiece of words and expressions. kudos sathya narayana
An expressive wordpainting Edith - emotions coloured and visuals eloquently expressed. Lovely.. j x
The last stanza has a beauty of its own...well...Edith, this one is a master frame...the line, 'Now, where's the light? . commands the entire poem to march towards bright colours...poem ten grade