Artificial Paradise Comments

Brilliant comment on modern times Martin...excellent imagery used...Fi 10+++

A sad but true look into those that care not of anyone but themselves. Very well expressed. Thank you for sharing :)

Great poem Martin, I know these people, always complaining that '' One can't get the help these days'' ha ha, very enjoyable, alana

very well expressed! ! ! thanx!

An awesome poem of the shallow lives of some of the rich. Well written with great rhyme and flow. An excellent write I'm glad I was privileged to read it.