Artemis And I Comments

Was good in the beginning, but at the end failed to actually rhyme, and some rhymes did not add up, I suggest re-looking at line couplets 7-8,9-10,11-12,19-20. these are not real rhymes despite that they may either sound similar or have similar endings. my suggestion, unless this is on purpose is to have a rhyming dictionary like RhymeZone with you while you are creating your poetry, also it is good to have a thesaurus in case there is a word that does not rhyme well you might be able to have a similar word that works better. All just suggestions.

good imagery make good poem great works thanks for sharing

A tribute heart-felt can never be ever better than this one yours...Good application

great vivid write....almost from the perspective of eye in the sky... I love Homeric themes and this is done with wit and care.... beautifully written....a lovely ode cheers

verry nice i admire the work put into this poem. shes a great goddess. amazing and the greek ones have ussually been my favorite also

A proactive statement for feminine virtues in one of the greatest female goddesses of grecco-roman pantheon. Though personally I like Athena slightly more, your dedication to this goddes is touching, and the sentiment is even more true.

Wow thats so inspiring...you write as if you know them so well...hmmm need to work on that myself...smiles...bravo

U got grt pieces of art, simple bt deep.kp on!

The words created an amazing harmony... I just love how you express the reality of how the goddess inspire women on the last part of this incredible craft, from fantasy to actuality...: D nice work!

A very nice devotional poem, I'm sure Artemis would approve.

There is a music in this poem.It has something of the Brahms Musensohn forgive me it is a long time since I saw this writtten out.You have captured the fresh air of the hunt running through the hair. This is an accomplished piece of verse and writing.

She is Diana the goddess I love Tough yet gentle, gentle like a dove Very subtle though philosophical and religious signifance are observed here.Well done.Nice conception.

I felt like I was traveling the journey with you and enjoying it all... the woods the clear pool... but I didn't peak.... and the admiration and protective aura and all the wonders you painted for us........ Thank you for the ride..... Jim Troy

Wonderful one Naida! ! ! Ur love for greek Gods n Godesses show in ur poems :) U r a lover of powerful, strong women as well as who have the very feminine factor within them.... lovely imagination tht was... Wish u vl get fame very soon :)

the meter is perfect for the scenes that you set. I felt as though i was in that forest hiding waiting for a glimpse. beautiful imagery and depth of expression. well done.

Good choice of theme for a dedication. Interesting use of language and the poem helps to create a scene if you are familiar with mythology. Excellent.

Wonderful imagination.Refreshing theme.Definitely an enjoyable read.Glimpses of great standard.10+++

i love how u pay your respect to Artemis. i too love remembering the greek gods and goddesses, and although Artemis is the best of the best, i appreciate Hestatia Goddess of the Hearth, u know, what she symbolizes and stuff like that. +10

So beautifully u have maintained the suspense about your idol Diana, untill in the stanza just before the last u disclose her identity. This aspect of ur poem makes its more interesting. You are a touch different poet from what I have seen out here. Well done Nadia.