Thursday, September 3, 2015

Artemis And Aphrodite Comments

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A vesper belt drops to the paramour’s wink.
An exhale of remnants both shadow and ink,
readying the curtains for descent.

Whose zinc lux turnt over that nocturnal ocean
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Jaxsun Castro Horn
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Fabrizio Frosini 03 September 2015

a well penned write, Jaxsun. And nice picture, too (BTW it's ''The Birth of Venus'' -in Italian: 'Nascita di Venere',1483-85, by Botticelli; on display at the Uffizi Gallery, Florence)

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Joel Horne 03 September 2015

I appreciate your comment. Thank you!

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David Wood 03 September 2015

Lovely use of metaphor in this delightful poem. Thanks

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Joel Horne 03 September 2015

You're welcome sir! Thanks for reading it.

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Jaxsun Castro Horn

Jaxsun Castro Horn

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