Art Of Picture Hanging. Comments

pretending to be hate when truly they’re love. vice versa or any other combination. they trick my mind and fragment it more! i like these llines in ur poem! ! ! pretention, emotions, fragments. life as it is uncovered. pain, sorrow, remorse.. is there also repentance! thank u for sharing this poem

This one works very effectively - but it would be cooler to take out that exclamation mark.

You've hung this one dead true Mary. I really like it. Creative expression; the love/hate without pretension. Fine work. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx