Monday, March 9, 2009

Art Of No Name Comments

Rating: 4.1

Flesh carved not of creation
Nor of accidental occurrence
An act of aggression, release
Confirms self control's reassurance
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Wendy Bureau
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Eir Lindstrom-holmy 09 May 2012

I've never understood why a person would cut themselves, and your poem has brought me much closer to seeing. You're a powerful writer. Looking at a random selection of your other poems, it seem to me that you tend to stick to similar forms in your poems, it could just be the ones I looked at, but I wondered if you experimented, for example with free verse. Great title / concept and very concise evocative language.

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Kesav Easwaran 06 May 2011

beautiful composition...artful meaningful metaphoric phrases...good work Wendy

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Bob Gibson 07 April 2009

Wendy! you have captured here not only the pain of the portrait but of the unknown sculpture bravo!

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