Murky the heart soilure sad
Impatient the mind tainted
Dark and benighted
Absolving of sins
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A powerful opening stanza of a great poem Murky the heart soilure sad Impatient the mind tainted Dark and benighted Absolving of sins Meditate and contemplate multiple sittings Resting like a lotus visioning a lotus Does bloom a lotus?
Flowered to aura! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Stay blessed always.
The Lotus takes birth in muddy aqua, yet it remains unsullied and unblemished! Truely a symbolic flower of divinity! A meaningful poem truely! 10 + -Raj
'Mire the pond muddy the aqua Mucky mossy grimy etcetera Afoul never the blooming flora Lotus red and white and blue aesthetic vista' very true. wonderful poem ma'am. thank you.
Reading your poem is like baring my body to a wisp of fresh moist breeze...! ! ! ! ! ! ! always refreshing! ! !
amazing piece of art! keep writing! dear, friend. could you read and comment on my newest poem, Mumbai Mourning, and other new poems, please? thank you.
Your slant references are very becoming of your chaste style of writing poetry that is refreshing. Thanks, arya
a thought provoking poem. read my new poems if you want long journey of life moments get through in life shades of life whisper of the wind
elegant work art of lotus... tis is splendid a write Indiradi..10
philosophy blooming a lotus here...lines adorned with lotus like words...a write ringing in lips and ears...a great poem this...vote ten petals for this
very nice poem indeeed...the expressions are amazing...keep it up
This is a beautiful srt ma'am as you carry the murky experience to a beautiful blooming joy. Wonderful and full of inspiration. Loved it.