Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Art Of Lotus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Murky the heart soilure sad
Impatient the mind tainted
Dark and benighted
Absolving of sins
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Indira Renganathan
COMMENTS
Varsha M 14 February 2021

This is a beautiful srt ma'am as you carry the murky experience to a beautiful blooming joy. Wonderful and full of inspiration. Loved it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 February 2021

It's a magnificent poem dear madam... appreciated!

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Akhtar Jawad 19 January 2018

A powerful opening stanza of a great poem Murky the heart soilure sad Impatient the mind tainted Dark and benighted Absolving of sins Meditate and contemplate multiple sittings Resting like a lotus visioning a lotus Does bloom a lotus?

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 November 2016

Flowered to aura! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Stay blessed always.

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Raj Nandy 29 March 2010

The Lotus takes birth in muddy aqua, yet it remains unsullied and unblemished! Truely a symbolic flower of divinity! A meaningful poem truely! 10 + -Raj

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 11 January 2010

'Mire the pond muddy the aqua Mucky mossy grimy etcetera Afoul never the blooming flora Lotus red and white and blue aesthetic vista' very true. wonderful poem ma'am. thank you.

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Seema Aarella 14 February 2009

Reading your poem is like baring my body to a wisp of fresh moist breeze...! ! ! ! ! ! ! always refreshing! ! !

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 01 December 2008

amazing piece of art! keep writing! dear, friend. could you read and comment on my newest poem, Mumbai Mourning, and other new poems, please? thank you.

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, aryaindia 08 September 2008

Your slant references are very becoming of your chaste style of writing poetry that is refreshing. Thanks, arya

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Seema Chowdhury 03 September 2008

a thought provoking poem. read my new poems if you want long journey of life moments get through in life shades of life whisper of the wind

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Rema Prasanna 10 August 2008

elegant work art of lotus... tis is splendid a write Indiradi..10

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Kesav Easwaran 30 July 2008

philosophy blooming a lotus here...lines adorned with lotus like words...a write ringing in lips and ears...a great poem this...vote ten petals for this

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very nice poem indeeed...the expressions are amazing...keep it up

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