Art Of Keeping Secrets Comments

when we live too much in our dreams and then crash into reality we find ourselves burdened with secrets that are better not shared 'so we hush' and the dreams are shattered...brilliant piece of art

I can relate, unfortunately, to this poem. Especially the part about a silent home. thank you for sharing.

Interesting title...'Art of Keeping Secrets'! your poem expresses two conditions or actions that's taken- some where in between - in keeping secrets.Good write...follow your Bliss [I read your bio] this is a good philosophical poem.

i lie this one too, , it's so realistic

It's no conversating with you...I think that line is meant to say It's no conversation with you. However you may have meant to say, It's no use conversating with you. In which case, I don't think every dictionary has agreed that conversating is a word. The more correct term is conversing, and I don't think it would throw off the rhythm of your poem. Anyways, I think you have splendid ideas, may need a little work with these kind of errors.

this is really intresting.. instantly u can tell when someone is keeping something while others hide it pretty well... i cant think of a good word to describe it but ur an awsome poet....

wow very good keep up the good work

AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! BEAUTIFUL! ! ! ! ! ! ! & i agree with you to some extent

oh my gosh this is amazing!