Expressive pen showcases variety of emotions,
In a piece of paper I found no repression,
Colorful words paint the heart and soul;
Author's personality mirror hung in nameless wall.
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' A boat in the river of glory that never sinks' that's my favorite line! very good, you're really good.
Just put a soul in these words O Lord........... and it will be the colour and the fragnance.....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Nice poem my friend 10+
Thank you for speaking so eloquently through your pen and for leaving your paper wet with excited tears. Great write.
skill of solemn mind. soul pictures on mirror. very beautiful poem. thanks md.
This is really good expressive writing. The end rhyming flow is especially sensitive.A well deserved 10!
Very expressive in that you point out poetry for you allows you to let your emotions flow freely and creatively. Great write. 10 Karin Anderson