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I loved reading it. Concluding line is beautiful..

Hazrat Ali said if you oblige someone beware of his cruelty in response. A nice poem.

Hazrat Ali said if you oblige someone beware of his cruelty in response. A nice poem.

When candle was dying you curl your palm as a savior fence to save, this is the divine act you performed, when candle squired the vigor to glow for the light..it did't burn you..think kissed yo, bear the pain of divinity..as he thanked you for the act..thank you nice poem kudos 10

how cruel you little candle, good writing, thanks.