Wednesday, December 16, 2009

Ars Poetica Redux Comments

Rating: 4.5

Dying trees easily fall..
Poems, too, as they should.
Dead wood rots from which
One good poem may grow,
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Warren Falcon
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Joan Woodbridge 14 September 2015

One of you best, Warren. Heartbreaking. Muchas gracias. Joan Woodbridge

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poem will grow and will have branches Beautiful poem will grow with fruits This poem won't break

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Russell Kennerly 28 July 2010

you had some really nice lines.

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Packed with profoundity. Well done my friend.

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Justin Unanue 27 December 2009

I am confused. You used visuals(the tree) but also bluntly stated the comparison (poetry) . Is this the right way?

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