Friday, August 17, 2007

Ars Poetica Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Poetry is taking a blind man
and trying to describe the rainbow to him
using no adjectives.
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Michael Ardizzone
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Raynette Eitel 22 August 2007

I opened this poem because Ars Poetica has always been among my favorites. This has a certain quality...some illusive, rather disjointed ideas about true poetry and I found myself nodding and smiling. You are a true poet, Michael. Keep up the good work. Raynette

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Joseph Daly 19 August 2007

anguage, I adore the use of language and here you make exemplary good use of it. The similes that you employ are both novel and well crafted. At first I wa a bit discouraged by the numbering of each stanza, but it appears that each could be read as a sererate poem

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