Thursday, June 29, 2017

Ars Poetica Comments

Rating: 4.7

My eyes are in trance
whenever I am with you,
In you.
I float like a snowflake and I hit the cold water
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Ann Marge
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Messaoud Allalouche 31 August 2017

very beautiful poem you are very talented Ann

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Ella Lazaare 30 June 2017

This is absolutely gorgeous. I especially love the description of a snowflake hitting water, becoming one while becoming none. Your rich selection of words really add to the beauty of the poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 June 2017

In trance in your presence, I float like a snowflake I swim in the deep blue of the sky In the enchanting world, the world beauty and angels when i think of you When i love you. Very nice and fine and emotional love poem. tony

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Chinedu Dike 29 June 2017

I can see you have a knack for poetry. Lovely and passionate poem. Thanks for sharing Ann.

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Simone Inez Harriman 29 June 2017

A lovely poem Ann of being lost in love. It seems when there is a union to become one the relationship becomes imbalanced with the writer becoming none. Sometimes thinking becomes too much and we just feel and likewise know.10+

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 June 2017

Very good. You may like to read my ars poetica (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Andreea Margarint 29 June 2017

Thank you! I enjoyed every word of your Poetic Sense!

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