My eyes are in trance
whenever I am with you,
In you.
I float like a snowflake and I hit the cold water
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This is absolutely gorgeous. I especially love the description of a snowflake hitting water, becoming one while becoming none. Your rich selection of words really add to the beauty of the poem.
In trance in your presence, I float like a snowflake I swim in the deep blue of the sky In the enchanting world, the world beauty and angels when i think of you When i love you. Very nice and fine and emotional love poem. tony
I can see you have a knack for poetry. Lovely and passionate poem. Thanks for sharing Ann.
A lovely poem Ann of being lost in love. It seems when there is a union to become one the relationship becomes imbalanced with the writer becoming none. Sometimes thinking becomes too much and we just feel and likewise know.10+
Very good. You may like to read my ars poetica (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks
very beautiful poem you are very talented Ann