Tuesday, September 19, 2017

Arrowed Heart Comments

Rating: 4.8

I wish my hand
Can touch the sky
To send in the moon
And bring out the sun
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Al Ameen Shuaib Assayouty Ologele
sun
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A very good write up 08 March 2018

very much okay. the poem depict more familiar symbols, which make the diction simple.

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Shuaib. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 September 2017

Such a good write worthy of a perfect vote.....10+++++

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Al Ameen Shuaib Assayouty Ologele

Al Ameen Shuaib Assayouty Ologele

Ilorin, Kwara State Nigeria
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