Friday, September 23, 2011

Arrow Through The Heart Comments

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Cant you heal this broken heart,
maybe not completely
I understand if that just cant be
just perhaps stop the pain?
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Anhelica Velasqsuez
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Sadness all over, disapointment fills the land..Love is pleasant no more...alas the right has found the wrong love... good poem. Thumb up.

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Crimson Love 23 September 2011

beautiful poem, so insightful......through the eyes of pain and hurting, Pain will always be there, we just hope, it fades in time and gets a little less painful....Excellent write :)

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