Arrow Of Death Comments

a fine write on the unavaoidable.

arrow of death never misses it throbs heart it cuts soul down shows ur philosophical insights...

Yes; arrow of death pierces the people as destined! Let us hurry to do good things to the society before the arrow kisses us!

good one no matter what you write about, always is good to read your work

you are right! wonderful touching words..........(wont you dedicate a poem to me? ?) hehe! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

no matter how well surrounded you may be, death has the finality.

That is a very good poem. I would say it is a master piece indeed.

Indeed death is invincible! Nobody can escape from its aim!

Ahmad aakum very nice deep and reflective words well spoken cheers...its a tenner

will vessel sail on dry ocean? very deep, i like this experssion and pray that we all fllow the right path

so influential poem as to affect the reader profoundly whilst reading it.

Oncemore you share your unique style with the world! Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

nice poem u clarify it very well

Will vessel sail on dry ocean? No, not all. Where there is birth, there is death too.

nicely written, well expresed, meaningful just another good one

'arrow of death never misses it throbs heart it cuts soul down' Nicely presented death in a lucid manner. Love 10

Lovely flow... a great poem friend! ! 10.. Ali