Friday, May 22, 2009

Arrow In My Heart Comments

Rating: 3.0

This single arrow is the only thing keeping my heart together
Pull it out and I will love you
Because you have killed me
And all that have caused my pain
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Shelby Jasmin Estrada
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Sameer Ahmed 07 June 2009

A beautiful poem conveying a very refine and pure emotion full submission to your adored one....10

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Kevin Fisher 25 May 2009

great poem I love your works so short yet they all hold such a strong meaning like this you know with the arrow in you your love can stay yet there will always be pain but if you remove this arrow your pain is gone yet so is your love tell me if this is what you was going for

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Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Friday Harbor, WA
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