Monday, May 8, 2006

Arrogance Comments

Rating: 5.0

What did you expect of us?
It's not like you made us to be successful, you arrogant deity.
If we were created in your image...
Why do we fight with such ferocity?
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Jack the Ripper
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Tai Chi Italy 22 October 2007

lol I had to laugh at this blasphamy Jack the R! lol A good write and it does make sense. Why oh who indeed. Smiling at you, Tai

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poppy paris 30 March 2007

Expectation= arrogance

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Dana Tyrrell 08 June 2006

ive now read some of your poems and i gotta say that i love your style, espically this one, keep 'em coming...lol

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Mary Nagy 29 May 2006

Great poem. I've only read a couple of yours so far but I really like what I've seen. Short and right to the point with a powerful punch! Very nice. Sincerely, mary

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Anna Russell 14 May 2006

Yup, this is my kinda thing. Well done. Hugs Anna xxx

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Francesca Johnson 09 May 2006

I like this one, its got attitude. And yes, it raises a lot of questions. Write more. Fran xx

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