Thursday, September 6, 2007

Arriving At Work, A Day Begins Comments

Rating: 5.0

A glint of early morning sun reflected
in the shiny waxed panels of the parked cars
with blinding rays of light from the mirrored wings
bursting star like on my eyes from a focal intensity
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David Taylor
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Margaret Alice 17 September 2007

I get the impression you felt the interconnectedness of everything; you connected with the sun through the burst of light reflection in your eyes; you felt connected to the beauty and freedom of the butterfly by realising you are breathing the same air -this is a description of an epiphany moment to be treasured; in almost a hallowed atmosphere - a privilege to share in it with you! Kind regards, Margaret.

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Jon Alan 16 September 2007

WOW! I am just loving your style and your words. Thank you for sharing these gems!

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x... x... 07 September 2007

Beautiful descriptives in here David as well as great details, like shoes hitting the gravel...BRAVO! ! ~~~mm.xo~~

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jkd jkd 06 September 2007

this is beautiful, david, well done

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Original Unknown Girl 06 September 2007

Stunning piece David, this has to be the very best of yours I've read.... superb! I'm adding it to my favs. HG: -) xx

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