Thursday, October 3, 2013

Arrival At Instow Comments

Rating: 3.5

Parked the car in the rain.
Took a stroll through the dunes.
Sensing the mellowness of sand,
The brightness of valerian;
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Susy Evelyne
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Stephen Katona 17 June 2014

Thank you for transporting me to Appledore, fragrances and all.

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John Brown 11 November 2013

Sounds like you had a lovely time too Susy.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 October 2013

The second stanza is beautiful!

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 03 October 2013

A beautiful poem, so nice to read, the words are written in dream like scene.

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Susy Evelyne

Susy Evelyne

Bristol
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