Tuesday, July 26, 2016

Arresting Moon - 17 Syllables Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Suzon Albert 25 February 2019

Wow so well thought poem.

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Sasanka Sekhar Panda 26 July 2016

Moon's reflection in the water of the pot. Excellent Asim. Carry on.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 July 2016

But, the moon moves on! Nice work.

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M Asim Nehal 26 July 2016

Ya, very true a futile try but to solace mind something is better. Thanks for nice comment, Edward.

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