Sunday, November 5, 2006

Arrested Thoughts Comments

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You have come too far...
To surround yourself in fear.
Shackled and attacked by thoughts,
Taught by those close and near.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Vasty Adade 09 December 2006

wow, this is so cool

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Diane Violet 05 November 2006

WOW, , , , , I'm in total agreement with Duncan and Asma. All the best, Diane

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Asma Bahrainwala 05 November 2006

'Eliminate a fate not yours.'...very well-said.. a thought-provoking poem... Asma...

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Duncan Wyllie 05 November 2006

Yes, this is very powerful writting in-deed, if we are to take charge of our actions then first we must ask our-selves what lead us up to that point, All of us have regrets but we must try and learn the lessons at hand and move on You offer the reader much to contemplate Lawrence Love duncan X

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