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So lovely poem--tells many things in a funny way!

Beautiful piece of poetry nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with insight. Thanks for sharing Amit.

Interesting poem. Past midway in life...plenty of time for reflection. Rhyming makes it all the more charming. Thanks for sharing.

A poignant poem, Amit. I hope you decide to write more

The rhymes it just continously repeatitive and it can bind to memory well...berry and all rry rrry rry...and how you added the story in it..it just lovely :)

I forgot the smell of the last woman apart her perfume that was Burberry In Moscow in a disco where life gave me lemons for my vodka She was part Skerryvore, daughter of an equerry I told her sorry back in my lanes of memory and I went on choosing a perfect french for my calvary my whirry loneliness in Britanny my red carpet strawberry I loved this stanza a lot. Thanks for the bouquet of words with a tail of -ry.... Loved the theme. 10 for it. Subhas

Your return matters a great for me. You have posted a meaningful poem and do hope your regular contribution whenever you have time.Thank you so much for sharing.