Around The Square Comments

A really enjoyable read...beautifully descriptive!

Nice poem Martin. The first line is a corker.

So you've seen her too eh......it's the Parfum that lingered on the air, that really got you....and the way she knew her bottom swayed as she walked away........

Has an exceptional flow to it. She brings to mind P. Hilton or one of the Kardashians. Excellent write, quite vivid and cleverly crafted. tfs

Such a lot of things they buy, in the incessant search for happiness! Another gem! Tom

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Great poem - wish I could afford to buy expensive perfume! !

As long as she uses her own hard earned money, we have nothing to complain about, Am I right?

a simple scenario described vibrantly. i love it.

I would change the word perfume to parfum! lol..more classy and French! I could almost smell the faint whiff..whoa, down, fellas!

well said and well pictured i like it very much.

This good... This is poetry, a painting of a lady gone shopping. Your words really come alive....i like this very much. Your are no doubt, a true poet. Nice imagery. Please do read mine and leave a comment/criticism. A picture and Written at midnight hour...thanks