Thursday, March 23, 2006

Around The Lake Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nestled in the mountains deep inside the heart of a city,
the lake nurtures and opens its vast reservoir,
not only to the living creatures small and big,
but also to vast array of human speicies frolicking around its perimeter.
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Jay P Narain
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Dianne Stephens 21 April 2006

i really love this poem thank you

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Preeti - is here! 19 April 2006

It's so real......very well described!

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Sydney Daniels 23 March 2006

Excellent, excellent, excellent. I could see it all, the warmth of the summer sun, the chill of the morning air. Great visual poem!

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Jay P Narain

Jay P Narain

Bihar, India
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